RIVERCLAN | WARRIOR | RAGGEDFACE
Nov 9, 2015 11:50:17 GMT -8
Post by jazz on Nov 9, 2015 11:50:17 GMT -8
raggedface
| 45 moons | ♂ | demisexual |
| riverclan | warrior | |
| green | grey-and-white |
name explanation
RAGGED-: During his apprenticeship, a battle injury resulted in the scaring and mangling of the left side of his face, making it appear ragged and torn
-FACE: This suffix complements his prefix, describing what about his appearance is ragged
-FACE: This suffix complements his prefix, describing what about his appearance is ragged
appearance
Tall grey and white tom with green eyes, the right side of his face is torn and scarred
As his name would entail, part of this toms face is torn and ragged. The right side is mangled with scar tissue and large patches of furless skin covering much of his right profile. It reaches from the base of his ear down to the bottom of his cheek, just around the jaw bone, spanning from the corner of his right eye, to behind his ear, with small patches of fur growing where claws did not tear it away. Definite claw marks can be seen on over his partially closed eye. Raggedface' left eye, while still somewhat functioning, is over 80% blind and isn't much use. If it wasn't for the large scar, Raggedface would be a rather handsome tom, with his broad head and pale yellow eyes, both narrow and somewhat slanted, the left more so than the right due to the scars. The ears sitting atop his head are large and triangular, always alert and listening intently.
Simply looking at Raggedface's pelt and physical structure, it is obvious that he is a RiverClanner. His pelt is sleek and shiny. Natural oils have collected over many seasons and created a waterproof barrier between the river and Raggedface' skin. This creates an oily sheen over his sleek dark grey and white pelt. Faint tabby stripes are visible within the dark grey of his fur, but at times can be hard to see, making him often appear a solid, slate grey. White, an almost tuxedo pattern, is found on his face, chest, underbelly, paws, and tail. A white blaze covers Raggedface' muzzle and tapers to a stop at the top of his head, just between his ears, spanning over the bottom half of his cheeks, stopping just below his ears and then down his neck, into his chest and underbelly. There are several smaller white markings to be found over his pelt, such as on the very tip of his tail and every one of his toes.
Under Raggedface' sleek pelt are solid muscles, rippling with every stride. After moons of training and swimming against the strong rapids, his muscles are strong, but not thick, they sculpt his lean but muscular appearance, covering his long limbs. He is just slightly taller than the average height of a typical clancat, with huge paws that aid him greatly in the water, slightly webbed between his toes, and a long, strong tail that at times acts as a rudder, helping to steer him as he swims.
As his name would entail, part of this toms face is torn and ragged. The right side is mangled with scar tissue and large patches of furless skin covering much of his right profile. It reaches from the base of his ear down to the bottom of his cheek, just around the jaw bone, spanning from the corner of his right eye, to behind his ear, with small patches of fur growing where claws did not tear it away. Definite claw marks can be seen on over his partially closed eye. Raggedface' left eye, while still somewhat functioning, is over 80% blind and isn't much use. If it wasn't for the large scar, Raggedface would be a rather handsome tom, with his broad head and pale yellow eyes, both narrow and somewhat slanted, the left more so than the right due to the scars. The ears sitting atop his head are large and triangular, always alert and listening intently.
Simply looking at Raggedface's pelt and physical structure, it is obvious that he is a RiverClanner. His pelt is sleek and shiny. Natural oils have collected over many seasons and created a waterproof barrier between the river and Raggedface' skin. This creates an oily sheen over his sleek dark grey and white pelt. Faint tabby stripes are visible within the dark grey of his fur, but at times can be hard to see, making him often appear a solid, slate grey. White, an almost tuxedo pattern, is found on his face, chest, underbelly, paws, and tail. A white blaze covers Raggedface' muzzle and tapers to a stop at the top of his head, just between his ears, spanning over the bottom half of his cheeks, stopping just below his ears and then down his neck, into his chest and underbelly. There are several smaller white markings to be found over his pelt, such as on the very tip of his tail and every one of his toes.
Under Raggedface' sleek pelt are solid muscles, rippling with every stride. After moons of training and swimming against the strong rapids, his muscles are strong, but not thick, they sculpt his lean but muscular appearance, covering his long limbs. He is just slightly taller than the average height of a typical clancat, with huge paws that aid him greatly in the water, slightly webbed between his toes, and a long, strong tail that at times acts as a rudder, helping to steer him as he swims.
personality
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Remains slightly resentful of ThunderClan due to the injury to his face.
Doesn't care much for the other clans wellbeing, while he is respectful, if it doesn't affect his clan, he will stay out of it.
Doesn't fully believe in StarClan and has spent much of his life contemplating its existence.
Very good at working with others, but can not stand idiocy or the wasting of his time.
He is rather charismatic despite his disfiguration, though he is still somewhat self-conscious about it.
Can be somewhat sharp tongued, and slightly short-tempered at times, often makes cutting remarks.
Doesn't care much for the other clans wellbeing, while he is respectful, if it doesn't affect his clan, he will stay out of it.
Doesn't fully believe in StarClan and has spent much of his life contemplating its existence.
Very good at working with others, but can not stand idiocy or the wasting of his time.
He is rather charismatic despite his disfiguration, though he is still somewhat self-conscious about it.
Can be somewhat sharp tongued, and slightly short-tempered at times, often makes cutting remarks.
Skills
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other
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